Okay, so, I’m beggining this adventure/danger/action story (i prefer to call it story because books mean they’re long, and I’m not sure if mine will be.) and I’m not really good at it. i enjoy writing alot and have great ideas, but my sister and my friends can all write it better than me. It seems i give them an idea and then we both write it, mine is 26 pages and theirs is the exsact same story, only at 150 pages. My strong points are describing, but i don’t have the vocabulary or the words to make good fighting seens. And seens that don’t involve fighting, well, my friends and sister are still better at writing those. I need some help! I get a good begining and end but i can’t figure out the middle. It’s like the begging is 20 pages, the middle is 5 pages, and the ending (because the middle was so crappy) is 4 pages. I dunno, i just need advice and help!
Thanks!
-Natalie
2007-04-16
13:57:32
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