okay. i wrote this poem. i'm 14. what do you think of it? note: constructive critisism is greatly appreciated.
so here it goes...
i never dreampt it possible,
never considered even once,
that i could be surrounded
by everyone i know
yet still could shake in pain
due to the lonlieness trapped inside me now.
i sit and stare at him and her,
at all lovers indeed,
and tremble in evny,
dreaming of what life could be.
visions of love and laughter
flood my mind and unite;
a picture perfect world
hidden right beneath my eyes.
these images of fantasy
are soon crushed by reality
and remind me that i'm crazy.
i hold on to what i do have still
and plead to defy fate
and what is sure to be.
my heart cries.
i don't want to feel alone for eternity.
2007-09-13
16:35:07
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