OK, this is a love poem, as I'm writing this I'm being inspired by love, but I need help. Wouldn't it be cool lf is she was a user in this site (Man, I could only wish, right?)? Her name is Nohemi, ain't that a pretty name. OK so the poem goes like this:
You are in my thoughts and dreams
You are the who I adore and love
You are my reason for existance
The one who I want to ask out
OK, so this is the problem. I was going to write: "But never get the chance to", after the last verse I wrote, but wouldn't it be more correct if I was to write: "But who I never get the chance to"? I would really appreciate your kind help guys and girls, help a man in love!
2007-02-19
03:00:19
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