I am writing an essay and it's due in 15 minutes. Problem is this paragraph is really weak and I need to add some "fluff" to it so that it will sound better...can you think of any sentences I could add? Thankss in advance
Third, being located in the Amazon influenced the decisions we made regarding Alcamedes' business and occupation variety. Since the natural resources included lush vegetation, a great amount of fresh water, and a variety of animals, we decided that we could split the occupations up into four categories. We decided that there would be gatherers- who gathered ripe fruits and vegetables, pharmas- who gathered herbs and oils as well as made the medicinal products, hunters- who hunted and cooked animals, and chuppers- who cut and built products as well as regulated the canoe transportation system. Evidently, the people did not have a choice as to what their profession was because the King, as needed, would assign these jobs to the people according to their gender & age.
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