I am writing an essay and it's due in 15 minutes. Problem is this paragraph is really weak and I need to add some "fluff" to it so that it will sound better...can you think of any sentences I could add? Thankss in advance
Third, being located in the Amazon influenced the decisions we made regarding Alcamedes' business and occupation variety. Since the natural resources included lush vegetation, a great amount of fresh water, and a variety of animals, we decided that we could split the occupations up into four categories. We decided that there would be gatherers- who gathered ripe fruits and vegetables, pharmas- who gathered herbs and oils as well as made the medicinal products, hunters- who hunted and cooked animals, and chuppers- who cut and built products as well as regulated the canoe transportation system. Evidently, the people did not have a choice as to what their profession was because the King, as needed, would assign these jobs to the people according to their gender & age.
2007-02-01 21:53:21 · 3 answers · asked by Lina 4 in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
I am your teacher and I am NOT impressed.
2007-02-01 23:37:35 · answer #1 · answered by balderarrow 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Third, being located in the Amazon influenced the decisions we fluffies made regarding Alcamedes' business and occupation variety. Since the natural fluff resources included lush vegetation, a great amount of fresh fluff water, and a variety of animals, we decided that we could split the occupations up into four fluff categories. We decided that there would be fluff gatherers- who gathered ripe fruits and vegetables, pharmas- who gathered herbs and oils as well as made the medicinal products, fluff hunters- who hunted and cooked animals, and fluff chuppers- who cut and built products as well as regulated the canoe transportation system. Evidently, the people did not have a choice as to what their profession was because the fluff King, as needed, would assign these fluff jobs to the people according to their gender & age.
2007-02-01 22:03:09 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Don' wait for anyone to write your essay for you. You are wasting time. Go to www.wikipedia.org.
BTW: Wonder what your teacher would say if she sees this???
2007-02-01 22:04:41 · answer #3 · answered by Combo 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋