i've written my girlfriend a poem because she has a lot on her plate (not something that i usually do) and i was just trying to get an opinion and a good title.
This torturous feeling of helplessness,
Which leaves me feeling as insecure as a newborn babe?
A lamb presented to the lions as a gift of romanticism
I complain not for I am truly blessed,
With a heart of greater magnitude than most athletes
And a strength of will surpassing that of mere mortals,
Patience she says then she will have it,
I will endure the tedium of life without her tender kiss
The feeling of sheer pleasure that simply being with her lets me know
Without the beauty of her I am reduced,
Just another speck of insignificance on the winds of time
She is poetry personified as surely as I write my inner most feelings,
Her demeanour may yet strike me down,
Yet I have seldom felt for any being or object this feeling
A joyous serenade to gods themselves I thank you
For I am truly blessed
2006-10-17
02:51:13
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