It is a catholic school and im in 8th grade and i really want to get in. so please tell me what i should change..little or big..
THE TOPIC:
Describe a person who has been important in your life. This should be someone who has personally touched your life and in some way made a difference in your life. You should include why you admire this person, how you might like to emulate him or her, and a concrete example(s) that illustrates his or her importance in your life.
MY ESSAY:
Many people have come and gone throughout my life and have had an effect on who I am today. One person in particular who stands out to me is my grandmother. She currently lives in another country, but I had the privilege of knowing over the few years she spent living with my family. About two years ago, my dad lost his job, so my family went through a difficult time. I couldn’t always do things I wanted to because of my parents’ money problems. My grandmother couldn’t help with
2007-12-06
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