likey my poem? i think its okay, i revised it alot the other night but i think it could be better.....
I also need help with a tittle...........
cheating boyfriend,
shattered heart,
what was perfect now lies on the floor in peices,
eyes now welling up with sad remorse,
it spilt over her eye lid and crashed on the floor,
the bottle on the table offered relief,
covered her sorrow,
sang her sweet all those whiskey lullbyes,
but the pain was still there,
pull the bullet and she lay still.
2007-02-14
07:06:51
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