Here is my opening paragraph. I need one more sentence for the opening paragraph according to my teacher. I'm going to add it at the end. Here is my opening paragraph so far:
America was not always a country where all races, ethnicities and religions were celebrated. From the seventeenth century to the middle of the nineteenth century there were plantations where slaves from Arica worked all day for no pay and just enough food to not starve. However, after slavery was abolished in the middle of the nineteenth century, life for the freed slaves was not much better. African Americans suffered from bigotry, discrimination, and segregation from the middle of the nineteenth century to the m middle of the twentieth century. [Closing sentence for opening paragraph]
What should the closing sentence for my opening paragraph be so I could get into the hardships of blacks? What will connect the opening to the body? I just need one clever sentence that will smoothly get into the paper.
Thnx
2006-08-28
08:14:26
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