I have this paper for my English class.
The needs of students are being ignored by schools, resulting in violence. My first reason to support my argument is that schools are not safe enough. And I talked about low security and how kids are able to sell weapons and drugs at school. My second kind of plays off of the low security in schools, because I talk about why and what kinds of violence kids do. kids feel like they can't talk to staff members so they use violence. My third is that school punishments are not working because kids are not learning from it and that they should focus on teaching kids how to communicate better with each other, also because they are not enforced. My question is, what paragraph should I talk about how kids feel unsafe in schools and it hinders their education in. Or should I leave it out.
I need to more ideas for my paragraphs, they need to be longer.
I kind of feel like I’m repeating myself in my second and third paragraphs, I could me just me.
2006-12-29
13:47:44
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