i need to wirte a poem for my english class about your life, and i don't really know if what i have is good..give me your opinions
this is just the beggining, its too long to put the whole thing.
I'm only fifteen years old but i'm wise beyond my years, i've been through warm and cold, through sweat and through tears. my life has come a long way although it feels so short. i steared my life through white and grey, every color of every sort. my whole life is ahead of me, so i shall not turn back. theres so many things i havnt seen, much more to learn infact. life isnt something you can plan, you take it as you go. just always have an open hand, and dont let your head lay low. although it may feel hopeless, and you sometimes need a lift, weather your rich or your homeless, life in itselfs a gift. sometimes it comes to fast and you dont know how to deal, looking back on what has past, you'll see that all wounds do heal. emotions can be confusing and hard to express, but i have to stop
2006-12-13
09:41:28
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