It is for her just because, not specificly for Christmas. I have spent a long time thinking about the words, and so far I have come up with
You are the sunshine of my day,
with your smile, your beauty and the kind words that you say.
(Need something to put here)
You make every moment special, and I cherish mine with you,
these are the reasons I love you, and this love is true.
Anyone have any ideas as to what I can put on here? Is this good so far, keep in mind I am only 14...
2006-12-13 12:25:17 · 6 answers · asked by Zach S 5 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Other - Arts & Humanities
Not literally what to say, like not word for word. Just what else can I write about? It seems awfully short...
2006-12-13 12:36:19 · update #1
Anything that comes from your heart, no matter how many words you will use.
2006-12-13 12:32:41 · answer #1 · answered by Mr Bean 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Your doing fine by yourself.
Just ponder a little while think it through and it will come.
Only 14 and showing a compassion and maturity some day a lady will be blessed to have you in her life as a husband.
Have a merry Christmas.
2006-12-13 12:38:50 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I need you like the air I breath,
With out you, I don't know who I would be
-----yes I think this is good sounds like u have an art for poetry, I like to write poems too and ur age has nothing to do with it. poetry skills prgress as u write, it's like everything else practice makes perfect. just keep working, and stop downing yourself!
hope this helps ; )
2006-12-13 12:31:59 · answer #3 · answered by vanoss_playerette 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
You light up my dreary days with your smile,
you are my refuge after the storm,
my safe haven in my journey.
But most of all I love you, because you are YOU.
(but you know what? it would be best if you be the one to write because then, it would truly reflect what and how you feel.)
2006-12-13 12:35:14 · answer #4 · answered by ? 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
The sun rises in your eyes with each new smile. You are the sunshine of my life. You are my sun., moon, and stars.
2006-12-13 12:36:03 · answer #5 · answered by sullyflower 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
eventhough you dont 24 hours with me(physically) you are always there in my heart.
[I hope this works]
2006-12-14 08:56:57 · answer #6 · answered by ♥♪♫Priya_akki™♫♪♥ 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋