These sentences are from a memo, self-introductory memo, that i am working on now, and few of my sentences seem to have problems.
So, can you check my grammar please, if you have any suggestion to make the sentences much better, please feel free to do it.
Thx u so much
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After graduating from SFSU, I plan to work in either the financing or accounting industry.
In the future, I hope to work for an online brokerage firm or insurance company as a financial investor.
I definitely want to work in United States or England because both of these countries are playing a significant role of the world economy.
Five years from now, I plan to pursue a Ph.D. degree of financing, and work in a financial company.
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2006-07-14
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