I've asked this before but it didn't get too much response, and I'm hoping for a tad bit more help...
Okies, so I wrote this for some anthology thing.. Tell me what you think... I welcome constructive criticism, oof, and please tell me what ideas or what pictures it puts across. =)
''Sufficiently Overdosed by your touch,
Perfectly Intoxicated with your affection,
Intensely Suffocated with your kiss,
Extremely Overpowered by your eyes.
Amazingly Stranded in your arms,
Sufficiently, Perfectly, Intensely,
Extremely, Amazingly, Dangerously
...In Love''
Well, yeah, constructive criticism, be honest now! Lol.
2006-10-26
03:53:07
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