in my essay, i wrote "she enrolled in kindergarten"but tehn the teacher corrected the sentence"she enrolled in a kindergatren"is it really necessray to add "a"??i really dont know when am i supposed to use "a"
then, i wrote something like "trajectory of success"and she circled "trajectory" too...what wrong with that word??
i wrote "i told her all the secret things i dared not share with otehr people"she canceled "dared"and wrote "dare".i dont know if i am wrong but shouldnt that be in past tense??
i wrote "but nowadays, stories of these people emerged as inspirations to many of us" she canceled "nowadays" and wrote "today"she underlined "these people" and put "one of these" and she also canceled the word "emerged" and changed "many of us" to "us"
what is really wrong with my essay????
2007-05-23
00:06:01
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