Avoid the dangling modifier. You can usually correct it by changing the subject of the sentence. Eliminate the dangling modifier:
1. Sitting at my window desk, the forklift was easily visible as it caught the corner of the pallet and spilled the bottles.
2. Handcrafted of solid oak, the cabinets' durability was guaranteed.
3. In order to water the seedlings efficiently, they need some sort of automated sprinkler.
4. Receiving new catalogue orders every day, joy reigned in the makeshift basement office.
5. Irritated by the lack of reply, her second letter was even harsher.
6. There are serious drawbacks with the plan when considering the long-range outlook.
7. After brainstorming a subject, the next step is a rough classification of items.
8. By cleaning up work areas themselves, custodial expense could be eliminated.
2007-01-15
04:12:53
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