can any one try to improve the sentences by tightening them -- eliminating redundancies, correcting poor sentence structures, etc. -- without changing the meaning:
1) For all intents and purposes, I’ve never yet met a dog I didn’t like.
2) The headstones were overturned, and vandals also destroyed the statuary.
3) His arrogant and cocky manner stems from his feeling of superiority over other individuals. Although unintentional, people do not hold high regard for someone of his nature in his social class.
4) The devastating flood was disastrous, but neighbors cooperated together to help each other out.
5) A person cannot eliminate the chance of uncertainty in making any kind of contingent plans whatsoever.
6) The fact is that I myself said that she was too absorbed in her own life to bother with the thing that was a problem for her sister.
please number your answers . thanks :)
2006-12-14
10:11:33
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Pilot777
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