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Dear Santa Claus:
I wish my gift for this year is to be happy. I am really happy these days, but I am not sure that this could last long. The other gift that I wanted is that I wish my mother and father to be happy, because if they were happy, then I am happy. The last thing I wish is that I wish you could bring the gifts to the poor. Give the poor some food, don’t let them get hungry. I know Christmas day is a very important person’s birthday, and that is Jesus Christ. Jesus Christ died to save the world, and he cared about poor people. I wish I were as great as him.
Sincerely, Hillary
P.S. Don’t eat too much or you will be unable to climb down the chimney!
2006-12-21
16:54:06
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