i am sort of struggling with the grammar on my essay
i am a foreign student that i don't know much about grammar
here's my essay----------------------------
pretzel is one of my unfavorite snacks. Even though it looks like
appetizing and delicious, in fact, it never tates good to me. Unlike sweet and softly-melting cookies, the prezel has a salty taste that it's taste detracts it from the value. In addition, the sense of tough is rough because of saltlike crystalization on the pretzel.
The reason that i don't like pretzel is because its salty taste and its roughness. Even when i eat a litte amount of pretzles, I usually feel that the sense of my tougue becomes dull due to their salty taste. Also, Because i prefer sweet cookies to tasteless snacks, i don't eat pretzels at all although there are lots of pretzles in my house. Moreover, when I touch the saltlike crystalization, the sense of my fingers become rough and coarse. Therefore, i don't like prezel at all.
2006-09-04
15:11:13
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Daine W
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