i am sort of struggling with the grammar on my essay
i am a foreign student that i don't know much about grammar
here's my essay----------------------------
pretzel is one of my unfavorite snacks. Even though it looks like
appetizing and delicious, in fact, it never tates good to me. Unlike sweet and softly-melting cookies, the prezel has a salty taste that it's taste detracts it from the value. In addition, the sense of tough is rough because of saltlike crystalization on the pretzel.
The reason that i don't like pretzel is because its salty taste and its roughness. Even when i eat a litte amount of pretzles, I usually feel that the sense of my tougue becomes dull due to their salty taste. Also, Because i prefer sweet cookies to tasteless snacks, i don't eat pretzels at all although there are lots of pretzles in my house. Moreover, when I touch the saltlike crystalization, the sense of my fingers become rough and coarse. Therefore, i don't like prezel at all.
2006-09-04 15:11:13 · 10 answers · asked by Daine W 2 in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
The pretzel is one of my least favorite snacks.
Even though it looks appetizing and delicious, it never tastes that good to me. Unlike sweet and soft cookies, the pretzel has a salty taste that detracts from the value. In addition, there is a sense of coarse or toughness because of salt crystals on the pretzel.
In summary, the reason I don't like pretzels is because of it's salty taste and roughness. Even when I eat a small amount of pretzels, I usually feel that the sense on my tongue becomes dull due to their salty taste. Also, because I prefer sweet cookies to tasteless snacks, I don't eat pretzels at all, even though there are lots of pretzels available in my house. Moreover, when i touch the salt like crystallization, the sense of my fingers is rough and coarse.
Therefore I do not like pretzels at all!
2006-09-04 15:31:48 · answer #1 · answered by jit 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Pretzel is one of my least favorite snacks. Even though it looks
appetizing and delicious, in fact, it never tastes good to me. Unlike sweet and softly-melting cookies, the prezel has a salty taste that detracts it from the value. In addition, the toughness is rough because of salt crystals on the pretzel.
The reason that I don't like pretzel is because of its salty taste and roughness. Even when I eat a few pretzles, I usually feel that they dull my taste. There are lots of pretzles in my house, but I prefer sweet cookies to tasteless snacks, so I don't eat pretzels at all Moreover, the salt crystals, make my fingers feel rough and coarse. Therefore, I don't like pretzel at all.
2006-09-04 22:24:46 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
Pretzel is one of my unwanted snacks. Even if it appears to be appetizing and delicious it never tasted good for me. Unlike sweet and softly-melting cookies, the prezel has a salty taste that makes it less valuable. In addition, the sense is tough and rough because of saltlike crystalization on the pretzel.
The reason that i don't like pretzel is because it's salty taste and its rough. Even when I eat a litte amount of pretzles, I usually feel that the sense of my tongue becomes dull due to their salty taste. Also, I'd rather prefer sweet cookies over tasteless snacks. I don't eat pretzels at all although there are lots of pretzles at home. Moreover, when I touch the saltlike crystals, the sense of my fingers become rough and coarse. Therefore, i don't like prezel at all.
2006-09-04 22:21:10 · answer #3 · answered by RJ 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
pretzels are one of my least favorite snacks. Even though it looks appetizing and delicious, in fact, it never tastes good to me. Unlike sweet and softly-melting cookies, the pretzel has a salty taste that detracts from its value. In addition, the sense of touch is rough (on the tongue) because of saltlike crystallization on the pretzel.
The reason that i don't like pretzels is its salty taste and its roughness. Even when i eat a small amount of pretzels, I usually feel that my tongue becomes dull due to their salty taste. Also, because i prefer sweet cookies to tasteless snacks, I don't eat pretzels at all, though there are lots of pretzels in my house. Moreover, when I touch the saltlike crystallization, my fingers become rough and coarse. Therefore, i don't like pretzels at all.
2006-09-04 22:20:54 · answer #4 · answered by Becca 5 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Pretzels are one of my least favorite snacks. Although is looks appetizing and delicious, in fact, it never tastes good (or it tastes bad). Unlike soft and chewy cookies, ( that I like). The tastes of Pretzels detract its value. In addition, it tastes salty because of the crystallization on the pretzel, and
its roughness. When I eat a small amount of pretzels, I usually feel that my tongue becomes dull due to their salty taste. Also, I prefer sweet cookies to tasteless snacks. I don't eat pretzels at all although there are lots of pretzels in my house. Moreover, when I touch the salt-like crystallization, the sense of my fingers become rough and coarse. Therefore, I dislike pretzel and don't eat them at all.
2006-09-04 22:42:21 · answer #5 · answered by okayokayokay 5 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Pretzels are one of my least favorite snacks. Even though they look appetizing and delicious, they do not taste good to me. Unlike sweet and soft, melting cookies, the pretzel has a salty taste and is hard and crunchy. The pretzel is also rough because of the salt crytals on it and it makes my fingers feel rough and coarse.
Even when I eat a little bit of a pretzel my sense of taste becomes dull because of the salty taste. Although there are lots of pretzels in my house, I don't eat them because I prefer the sweet, yummy cookies.
2006-09-04 22:26:03 · answer #6 · answered by cmar 1 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Pretzel is my least favorite snack. Even though it looks appetizing and delicious, it doesn't taste good to me. Unlike the sweet and soft cookies, a pretzel has a salty taste.This taste detracts from the value. In addition, the pretzel, has a sense of tough and rough because of the saltlike crystalization thats on it.
The reason I don't like pretzels is because of this taste. Even when I have eaten a few of them, I usually feel the sense of my tongue becoming dull due to their salty taste. I prefer sweets as a snack, compared to pretzels. I don't eat pretzels, although you will find many of them in my house. Even when I touch the saltlike snack, there is this sense in my fingers and they become rough and coarse . Therefore I don't like to even touch them.
2006-09-04 22:24:00 · answer #7 · answered by southernmom4now 1 · 0⤊ 1⤋
The pretzel is a snack that I dislike. Even though it looks appetizing and delicious, in fact, it never tasts good to me. Unlike sweet and soft-melting cookies, the pretzel has a salty taste. Because of the saltlike crystals on the surface of the pretzel, it is rough to the touch.
Your second paragraph is just a "repeat" of your first one. You need to come up with a different paragraph. Use your family or friends and if they like it and why or why not. You will also need at least one more paragraph to sum up everything that the first two have said.
Try again!
2006-09-04 22:23:24 · answer #8 · answered by ru.barbie2 4 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Although a pretzel appears appetizing and delicious, it is one of my least favorite snacks. Unlike sweet and softly-melting cookies, the pretzel has a salty taste that, for me, never tastes quite right. The texture is rough beause of those salty crystal sprinkles that cover it. They leave my fingers feeling rough and course and they leave my tongue feeling numb. My family keeps a lot of pretzels in the house to snack on. But I don't eat them. I prefer sweet cookies to salty snacks anyday.
2006-09-04 22:23:23 · answer #9 · answered by mJc 7 · 0⤊ 1⤋
the only way you're going to learn english grammar is by practicing; i recommend buying some grammar books and asking your teacher or whoever if u can spend extra time with them to go over ur essay and the grammatical errors within it
2006-09-04 22:17:06 · answer #10 · answered by alley 2 · 1⤊ 1⤋