I'm try to make an 8 sentence paragraph. I have 7 I believe. Can this be altered to make 8? Or does it need more content. It's for my grade 8 language arts class.
Not asking for my homework to be done. Just helped.
It's topic is why people are leaving the city for the suburbs.
There are many reasons City of Toronto residents are moving into the suburbs. Some of the most notable one’s may be the fact Toronto’s population has almost doubled in the last 10 years and the city itself is becoming extremely populated in the downtown core with more and more office buildings being built each year. Residents are now sprawling out to the huge developmental areas of Scarborough, Markham and other surrounding areas. The suburbs themselves offer safer, cleaner neighborhoods. The suburbs are where families can be raised, where kids can enjoy the outdoors in places like parks, community centers and not have to worry about the noisy dirty core of the city itself. The suburbs offer quiet family oriented neighborhoods with plenty of parks and trails that are safe for the whole family. As a result, more and more city residents are moving to the suburbs.
2006-06-21
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