This is something I wrote.I am an amateur,I am 16 and I would please like your opinion about it.Thanks.
If Only
I do not mind letting you go
with what you have taken from me
the memories you leave behind can last me a lifetime
the moments we have shared can see me through
if only you will still come in my dreams
as you used to…
I do not mind not following you
to the ends of the world
to spend all my breathing moments in your presence
if only you will hold me when I die
and whisper ‘I love you’, even if it is a lie
for one last time…
I do not mind knowing you are happy elsewhere
and will be, without me-
after all, one smile from you compensates for everything I have got
(however cliché it might sound, my love)
if only I can see a tear in your eye
as I fade into darkness…
forever.
2007-01-18
05:32:32
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