Are they correct in English? If they are not correct, how can I correct them? I cut my article to sevral parts cuz i want ppl reading them carefully, so this sutff is very important to me, please help me! Thanks for reading this!
"This inscription in front of you is written by comrade Zhu De. The display building is behind us, the previously mentioned information is included in it. Several decades have passed by, but time can not wipe out the hero’s history and the green pines will be accompanied by the struggling spirit. General Yang Jingyu has not vanished, his heroic deeds encourage us to defend the homeland, and enhance the strong will of building a modern and powerful socialist country!"
2007-10-15
23:55:50
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