i didn't know where to post it...i thought i would post it here :)
there is a poem...please give your opinions on it...and suggestions too :) please!
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Dark and damp is the cave of life,
Where I lay with my eyes closed,
I dream of the time which passes by,
I breathe it through my soul.
I find it hard to catch it, whole,
to laugh and dance to its hopeful tune,
it slips away from the corners and cracks
of the little hands I own.
with a wistful smile
I watch it go,
with a wish, it would turn back,
Not even for a moment it
looks behind,
though I still watch it pass.
I look above to my dark sky,
No sun, to warm my eyes,
I find a hole in the rocky clouds,
That lets a light to shine...
It glows through the hole,
so bright and warm,
It fills my world with joy,
I lock it in my eyes and hair,
for not letting it slip by.
2007-04-29
05:23:06
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