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Sorting
In the bacon-colored
cedar closet, the rack.
Cordovan wing-tips,
patent leather dress,
plain-toed Army brogues
stand upright as soldiers --
under their dust, wax shines.
House slippers,
left one scuffed to rags,
right almost new,
do the best they can.
Slip-ons slouch,
stained from garden
weeds and soil.
A box waits for most,
carefully stacked full
as though it
mattered. “Take some,”
she says, “you wear the same
size as your dad. The rest are just going
to Saint Pat’s. Take some.”
A pair of cordovans joins
a suitcase overfilled with socks
and casual sweaters.
Next we sort the guns.
2006-07-12
20:47:00
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