Hi there all , please can you tell me what you think to my recent poem, please give constructive comments please, tell me how it makes u feel for i try and write about things that spark emotion, if it doesnt do anything for you please tell me why?, may thanx for your time.
Cold heart
The simple fact you’re here no more
A simple act my heart you tore
The pain caused will never relieve
For your love I will never receive
Alone in gloom I will sit
In this depression till heart is fit
I fear to try, scared to the core
Towards me love has closed its door
Now I understand love and its lines
The delicate structure and how it entwines
A flip of a coin what will it be
Love or hate directed towards me
My heart has grown cold and without care
No longer do I wish my life to share
2007-03-20
21:56:37
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