whats wrong with the following sentences, if any, plz help amend them.
my teacher indicated those mistakes by highlighting them.
1.Once becoming poor, what could you do?
I just dont get: for instance, 'Picking up the textbool, the teacher started to read'. This's a correct one, anyway i can't tell the difference.
2. What sets entirely us apart from... highlighting ENTIRELY
3.There has been much concern about the gap between the rich and the poor is broadening. teacher highlighted ABOUT, is THAT better or the only correct one?
4. It deems the main reason for worsing poverty. highlighting DEEMS and WORSING
5. The rich has influence over..... highlighting HAS
6. All basic necessaries of life are associated with business with the rich. highlighting WITH THE RICH , what i meant is 'the business is run by the rich.
7. Having built good train system. teacher arrowd between BUILT and GOOD indicating a lack of preposition or something.
2007-02-01
23:23:07
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