A buddy of mine is putting finishing touches on this song before he produces it, and I thought some feedback would be nice. His music and songwriting is heavily influenced by Elliot Smith.
"Memento"
thoughts fall down like rain
I wish I knew what’s different
and what’s the same
it’s just like money spent
won’t even matter where it went
we’re here to stay
the sounds eclipse the thought
vibrations lift the wall
a shadow crawls
gone, gone, you kiss it goodbye
today’s perfect truth
tomorrow’s lie
me, my note in my brain
yesterday it stayed there
but it went away
gone for good
didn’t even say
I’m stuck in yesterday
tomorrow’s torn away
I wish I could go back
I wish I could go back
I would go back and change
wave, wave hello
is it something I can’t have?
apparently so
I wish I could go
day filled with blue
a green surrounding you
a yellow for the sun
2007-03-07
09:52:14
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