heres what i got so far its over money and im writing the bad sides of it.
my outline looks kind of like this
-intro
-change money brings
-problems money brings
-greed money brings
-conclusion
I only got the firs 3 paragraphs done can you guys tell me what you think im not good at grammer which is the main reason i put it up here can a kind sole guide me i will kill my self if i fail
Does The Size of Our Pocket Matter?
Do you want to be a millionaire? A lot of people dream about it every night. Sure it would be great to acquire almost anything you want but, is it really more important than a healthy cheerful family? Many people are unaware of the problem and responsibilities money can bring to a person life. Although money is an important factor of living, one must not give up his or her life, demanding to become wealthy.
In the olden times people used gold and silver as a source of trade which was truly
inconvenient, this in turn brought the concept of money as a way of trade to citizens. Money can
change the way a person looks at things. There are lots of sayings out their explaining that
money is the root of all evil. It is what makes one do awful and regrettable deeds. Money makes
you get away from the things you loved and your proper friends that actually care about you and
not your capital. This wealthy person starts acting, speaking, and even thinking differently. The
concept of money brings an entire new personality to the person.
As if change was not enough for this wealthy man, this person also experiences problems. A common person has the belief that big numbers will resolve all their troubles and will bring them a life of happiness. This might be true to some sense but truth is they just are not happy. In fact, wealthy people are more likely to suffer from depression and stress due to the amount of responsibility money brings. The Millionaires will have to watch their every move because the spotlight will be always on them. The phrase “with great power comes great responsibility” comes into play tremendously with this wealth. In my opinion money should be looked at more as a concept then something you need in order to be succesfull. Successful
2007-09-28
10:44:04
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Arfan Q
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