I can't even thing of a plot, my story sucks, and I have to finish it for tomorrow's class. GREAT. Here is what I have so far - if anyone can think of a few good plot ideas, that would be so awesome! Or any tips on how to improve it...
A gold haze swept over Spirit Valley as the morning sun rose from the sky. Dew covered the ground, and an eagle soared high above. A cool breeze ran through the air…a gentle reminder that it was time for the birds to start with their song to welcome the new day. A vixen awoke from her slumber, and made her way towards a cave in the northwest corner of the valley. As the cave came into view, the eagle Sierra flew down to greet the young fox. “Good morning Kitsune”, said the eagle. “Good morning old friend”, Kitsune replied. Taking a few steps forward, she stopped and turned back toward Sierra, who was quietly perched on a large rock. “Say, have you seen Shadow anywhere?” She asked, her green eyes sparkling with wonder. Sierra sighed, and looked up towards the sky. “His flight training was supposed to begin an hour ago” she said, and let out a small laugh “that silly wolf. He is probably still sleeping.” The two turned their heads to stare at the waterfall beside the cave. After a long pause, the eagle looked down at the ground and shook her head. “He has had more than enough sleep, it’s about time he got a wakeup call”, she said, and turned to face the vixen. Kitsune nodded and walked up to the cave entrance.
2007-09-27
14:48:45
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