Hunted
Alison breathed out heavily as she dropped her army green rucksack onto the slightly damp wooden floor. Closing the hotel room door firmly behind her, she looked around. The hotel was not really a hotel, it was a three storey cabin type building. Everything was wooden and damp due to the weather outside. The room was small but not uncomfortable. There was a medium sized bed in the middle of the room, a rusty radiator and a tiny chest of drawers pushed up against one side of the bed. The one small window was so steamed up that you couldn’t see through it due to condensation. The wallpaper was plain white, making everything seem bigger than it was. pacing slowly over to the bed, Alison sat down. How long had it been? She wondered. How long did she have?
For a few moments she stayed there, lost in thought. Standing up and sighing, she ran her hands through her thin, wispy brown hair and strode over to the bathroom. How did I end up like this? She asked herself in the mirror. Staring back at her was a thin, tired face that she barely recognised. The sound of heavy rain drew her attention to the window, she walked leisurely over to it and wiped a circle in the condensation. Looking through the window, she noticed two things. The first was that only one lamppost was alit and the second was that there was a man, tall and hooded standing directly underneath it, staring straight back.
The person at the lamppost must be joined by others. The story needs to be a suspense crime fiction story with a maximum of 10,000 words. Can you please help me on the basic plot or storyline? I’m good at description, I’m just not very imaginative. Please help!!
2007-03-06
05:35:08
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