I need some help with this sentence...I'm realllly bad with avoiding runons and wordiness...perfect example is right here...I can identify my "bad" sentences but for some reason, I just don't know how to fix them!
During elections, (though some states do allow split votes) many states participate in the “all for one candidate” system and because of this, the minority party in a state may be blocked out due to tha fact that all the votes do not go as a ratio to the votes coming from the popular vote of that state…but from the majority party.
[this sentence comes from an essay I am writing- "Should the Electoral College Be Abolished?"...I'm saying "Yes, it should."]
2006-12-29
01:23:18
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