"i want you to tell me the truth, whats going on jenna?" said mum in anguish. !how many more times? , there is NOTHING going on, OMG don't look at me like that! why don't you believe me?" replied jenna angrily." ...because...i'm your mother, i know when something's wrong, please hiney just tell me..." "you don't get it do you? if you don't believe me then there's nothing either of us can do about it..." "really well guess what- you're grounded!" "OH NO I AM NOT" she bellowed and with that she ran out of the house slamming the front door behind her. she was long gone before her mum even had the chance to yell at her.
ok so thats the beggining of my english coursework story so er what can the story be about, what can the argument be about, i've got to hand this in tommorow and i just started writing i have no idea how to develop this story also can you tell me what you think of the story? ok thanks can you please try and be nice to me like only constructive criticism...thanks guys
2006-09-28
06:33:12
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