I love to write poetry, and I've written 42 since Novemeber. But I'm just trying to get people's opinions about some of my poems. So here's two.
The Wish I Wished
Last night I wished upon a star,
Hoping it would find you wherever you are.
The wish I wished was made for you,
And it was wishing that all your wishes would come true.
The wish I wished last night,
I wished with every bit of might.
I’m hoping that my wish will come true,
So that all of yours can too!
The Liar’s Words
There was a time when I believed,
Everything you told me.
But then one day I found out the truth,
And I realized you had lied.
When I found out you had lied to me,
It hurt me deep down inside.
Your lies had led me to believe,
Something that wasn’t true.
And since I thought your words were the truth,
I started to fall for you.
And know because of what you said,
It makes me cry every once in a while.
So now I know not to believe,
The liar’s words.
2006-07-27
10:52:24
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