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DREAMS
Dreams we take them for granted
Some wild
Some mild
yet all the same.
2006-07-27 11:40:28 · 6 answers · asked by Courtney 2 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Other - Arts & Humanities
god, this is TERRIBLE!!!
2006-07-28 08:02:52 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
very nice poem
2006-07-27 11:52:24 · answer #2 · answered by skyzze 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Cool! But formatically speaking, you might want to separate the first line.
DREAMS
Dreams...
We take them for granted
just a suggestion.
2006-07-27 11:44:32 · answer #3 · answered by Crys H. 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
that's pretty good. I also write poems.
2006-07-27 11:50:08 · answer #4 · answered by *Shy Girl* 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Nice..
2006-07-27 11:44:38 · answer #5 · answered by oblivionpr 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
nice one
2006-07-27 11:47:00 · answer #6 · answered by Neefs Portillo 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋