Someone said my poems are nice but kind of gloomy, but they don't understand that I was just venting and letting loose my feelings at that time.. here's one I wrote a long time ago, when I was a young fool in love, lol...
I didn't really like it but.. I hope you like!! (If you haven't seen my other poems, got to my Q&A and leave a comment on them for a chance at 10 pts..
What's this feeling in the pit of my stomach,
Only when I think about you?
You brighten up my day in a unique way,
It's just when I think about you..
Lovesick with butterflies,
Only when I think of you,
Hit with the laughter in your eyes,
It only happens when I think about you
You're like a brother, father, good friend
Just keeping smiling, it won't end..
I met you last week and I feel this way
Pulsing through my mind, all day
Baby, you're always on my mind,
When I'm in trouble, you're my last lifeline
I'm always trying to make time,
To just sit and think abou you..
Good for a starter huh?
2006-07-17
15:28:13
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