I'm not sure how you would revise this sentence without making it to another sentece. The directions says to only to replace a phrase with a word, replace a clause with a phrase, or take out unnecessay worss. Help?
Since then, Perlman has appeared with every major orchestra, recorded most of the standard violin works, played on film soundtracks, and made jazz , ragtime, and comtemporary recordings of music that he has played.
[[I'm not 100% sure if this is acutally a run-on sentence, but I believe it is, since it is quite lengthy. I appreciate any help. :)]]
2007-12-18
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