Concise Writing
Rewrite the following 97-word paragraph. keeping all its ideas but reducing the number of words. Try to use no more than 40 words.
We would like to meet face to face with our old rivals, but they still regard us in a way that shows a lack of confidence. We understand their frame of mind. They are short of temper. but when others have suffered, they have not been without concern, interest, or feeling. The feeling of ill will that they have had toward us has to a large extent diminished. We might become friends. A year ago, such a possibility would have seemed too extraordinary to be believed.
2007-10-29
04:30:31
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