In the Bay Area, where I have liven all my life, the rich histories of the 49ers, Giants and A’s drew me into the sporting world.
2007-10-28 19:17:56 · 14 answers · asked by DJ4LIFE 2 in Education & Reference ➔ Words & Wordplay
I have lived in the Bay Area my entire life, where the rich histories of the 49ers, Giants, and A's drew me into the sporting world.
2007-10-28 19:21:23 · answer #1 · answered by Rabullione 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
In the Bay Area, where I have lived all my life, the rich histories of the 49ers, Giants and A's drew me into the sporting world.
2007-10-29 10:43:27 · answer #2 · answered by del_icious_manager 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
In the Bay Area, where I have lived all my life, the rich history of,the 49ers, the Giants, and the A`s, drew me into the sporting world.
2007-10-28 19:31:31 · answer #3 · answered by billako 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
The rich histories of the 49ers, Giants, and A's in the Bay Area, where I have lived all my life, drew me into the sporting world.
2007-10-28 19:23:03 · answer #4 · answered by neniaf 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I have lived in the Bay Area for all of my life. Its rich histories of the 49ers, Giants and A’s drew me into the sporting world.
2007-10-28 19:27:25 · answer #5 · answered by draconic_eirein 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
The rich histories of the 49ers, Giants and A's drew me into the sporting world of the Bay Area, where I have lived all my life.
(The rich histories of the teams you are talking about is the key part of the sentence, so it should come at the beginning b/c that's what's interesting and what you want to grab the reader with. The fact that you lived in The Bay Area all your life is good information, but it can go at the end of the sentnce. It's not as important and it's boring and verbose at the start of the sentence. )
2007-10-28 19:24:40 · answer #6 · answered by girlie 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Having lived all my life in the Bay Area, the rich histories of the 49ers, Giants, and A’s drew me into the sporting world.
2007-10-28 19:22:00 · answer #7 · answered by hrcarr 4 · 0⤊ 2⤋
I've lived in the Bay Area my whole life and the rich history of the 49ers, the Giants and the A's drew me into a world of sports.
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Is this an introduction to a paper? You should elaborate more before you say who the sports teams are...just a suggestion.
2007-10-28 19:23:11 · answer #8 · answered by Nikki 4 · 0⤊ 2⤋
i think it is,
In the Bay Area, where I have lived all my life, the rich histories of the 49ers, Giants, and A’s drew me into the sporting world
goodluck:)
2007-10-28 19:22:50 · answer #9 · answered by cweaver_92 1 · 0⤊ 2⤋
In the Bay Area, where I have lived my entire life, the rich history of the 49ers, Giants and A's have drawn me into the world of sports.
That's a little bit better but maybe not perfect.
2007-10-28 19:22:47 · answer #10 · answered by dawnsdad 6 · 0⤊ 2⤋