I'm not talking about isolated thoughts. I mean in an extended piece in which the person who's telling the story is engaging in extensive dialogue and is also telling you his/her thought process, how do you distinguish between the two? Italics is a possibility for the thoughts, but might look cluttery after a bit. Or no quotes, just a comma at the end of the thought before the "I thought." Here is a fictitious, over-simplified example:
"I love your shirt!" I said.
"How tacky it looks!" I thought.
or
"Do you want to go out tonight?" I asked.
"Please, please, please be free!" I thought.
I don't see anything that explicitly deals with this in my grammar books. They just advise to use italics sparingly, or else it makes your writing look amateurish. And as I said before, the writing I am talking about is FULL of things verbalized and thoughts not verbalized.
If anyone has any suggestions, I'd appreciate it! And if you know of any sources on the issue, that would be even better! Than
2006-12-26
10:13:47
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Kris
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