Hey I just got done editing this poem. Let me know what you think of it, give me some feedbacks if you want, and rate it please (1 to 10, 1 being low and 10 being high).
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I wish you knew this other ride
Travels to a different side
Where everything just seems to be slowing
But the miles just keep on rolling
The road fades midnight black and blue
But chances are you have no clue
Most come here to post
Others to just get lost
To disappear
And then reappear
With clearer thoughts to look into
Finding that way to carry it through
I’m back on this road again
Allied by my very best friend
Penciling all the things I lack
And all the things I got right on track
All my missed chances
All those so close dances
And how all those dreamy dreams almost came true
If only I could just show you
2006-11-11
15:44:45
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