Here's the poem I wrote. I would like to know if it uses alliteration. I tried to, but if it doesn't can soembody help me?
Winter
Brisk but beautiful white snow,
Falls furiously out of the foggy skies.
The cold air crawls through the night,
And the baby bird no longer flies.
The days are windy and covered with white snow,
While the streets are silent and lone.
The outdoors seem so abandoned,
That you can't go outside without feeling alone.
Winter is wonderful,
But sometimes a bit dull.
The touch of soft snow,
Can make you lull.
2007-12-17
10:46:58
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