Ok, at the moment I'm working on an essay for my eighth grade English class. We've just complete reading the screenplay "The Diaries of Anne Frank," and must now write an essay on it.
The promt goes as follows,
"John Dickinson once said 'We cannot be happy without being free.' Convince me to agree or disagree with this quote by using examples from the story."
So far I have my introduction paragraph completed and I need help revising/editing it. I also have a small case of writers block...uuhhggg....and need a few ideas for supporting ideas.
I'm running out of space so I'll include my first paragraph in a second. Any comments on it help, be gramatical or anything else.
2007-05-05
11:44:22
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