I'm learning English as my second language. If there is anyone who can correct my English grammar below, I would be VERY appriciated!!
"In order to make the Non-Smoking law effective, there are several proposals. First, patrols by officers should be taken place. Second, advertisement to promote a good smoking manner also should be mandated to cigarette companies. Bill boards, ads on a subway, TV commercials are considered to be effective. Third, the government should set up smoking spots in a city to protect smoker’s rights. The smoking spots should be built mainly from the income of the cigarette tax."
2007-04-01
21:18:06
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