I am doing a self evaluation on my presentation that i did last week.
please check my grammar here. If you have any suggestion to make these sentences better, please feel free to comment.
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Having a smile on my face, dressing formally, I have done a great job on my presentation.
My visual aids were attractive and easily readable because the presentation included art, graphics, photos and a fancy template to illustrate ideas.
I also organized my presentation very well, giving a lot of good examples on how to write an application, categorizing three steps to write an application letter, including all the information of how to write an application letter.
However, I was little too nervous in the beginning when I was delivering the presentation.
The butterflies suddenly fly into my stomach.
I had a stomachache; the stomachache happened every time during the presentation.
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thank you very much for checking the sentences.
2006-08-03
18:00:46
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