Is there anything incorrect in this paragraph ? Something that acnnot be said in English ? Plz help and feel free to suggest any changes
Of course there were situations that put me down and ones that affected my academic records either positively or negatively. The fact that I traveled a lot made me respectful of those who comes from different cultural backgrounds and made me fluent in three languages, and I am looking for more: I would love to learn Spanish someday. As a negative situation I would mention a recent one: I had two jobs and was a full time student and was so overwhelmed that I couldn’t do everything at once and in the end I had to drop one of my classes . Of course I took it again and passed it with a B+. This was both a negative and a positive experience : it is true that it cost me money and time, but since then I understood that my only full time job is being a student.
2006-06-05
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