this was the 1st poem i wrote ... (i'm only 15 so dnt expect alot ).... constructive criticism only please! i'll post up some more soon...
thanks!!
Every night you're here,
Laying by my side,
saying the three words,
I know you'd never lie.
It's too good to be true,
Or that's the way it seems,
I was right, it's perfect,
I wake up, it's just a dream.
I live my days to sleep at night,
and dream this dream again,
To love each day without you,
I know my life would be pain.
Every time we talk,
My heart, it skips a beat,
Just like in the movies,
When two lovers meet.
I never want this feeling,
I have for you, to end,
Because if we're never more,
You'll always be my friend.
I've never known anyone,
To be quite like you,
To do the things that you've done,
And be so perfect too.
2006-07-31
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