Hello,
Is this any good?
I've wrote it about what I think about the world today, can you tell me about what you think and If I can improve it?
In the middle of making tabs for guitar as I speak, this song will be fast paced rock, with a upbeat tempo
Thanks!!
DOOMSDAY
Countdown ticks to zero
This world is in dire need of a hero
Terrorist dreams of having fun
The end of the world has just begun
Armageddon is nigh now is the time you will die
Bombs away is the call confusion and death to all
The final countdown has begun
Where will it end
Where will it stop
Is this world set in for rot
Eternal darkness
Or eternal light
Either way I'm not ready for the fight
Press the panic button get out at once
Family and friends are who you should be near
Full of apprehension and filling up with tears
time is running... yeaaahhh out!!
Doomdsay has come!!
(This material is copyrighted as my own, so no copying THANKS!!
2006-06-25
03:40:51
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