OK i am having even more trouble with my book.
which begining sounds better to you?
"In the middle of the night, The people in a small village woke to the sound of metal clanging against metal, and a woman’s cries of pain.
As the people in the village stepped out of their houses curious as to what was happening the trees nearest the village from a forest burst into flames. Some people walked out into the street staring at the flames, while others ran inside to call for help. But as quickly as the mysterious fire came it disappeared."
or
"In the Middle of the night in a forest clearing. Just visible by the moon light were two people fighting, the sound of metal hitting metal echoed throughout the neighboring village as the man blocked an attack from the woman he was fighting."
Thanks for the help!
P.S. should i say what village it is?
2007-02-14
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