Just out of curiosity I'm wondering if this stuff I write is lame or actually cool.. Last night I was bummed about stuff and I wrote a sorta sad song to God to let it all out and felt better then... I write stuff alot and once in a while put it to music. What do you think of this song?
The song:
Dont want my heart to be dying inside
Dying while trying to just stay alive
The more that I love the more that I hate
This lingering silence I want you to take
I just want to close my eyes
Drown out the noise
Cant feel my heart beating
My breath slowing now
My efforts in vain when I try to escape
I dont want to be here
But I am still here
And you're not too late
I've been here before but it's lonelier now
The door of my heart will not let me get out
I've tried and I've cried All that my strength will let me
Unable myself I see you hold my key
(chorus again then: )
Free me, Open me, Love me, Save me
2006-10-31
12:32:15
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